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[Yama fic] Fallen Angel

Title: Fallen Angel
Pairing: Yama (Ohno x Sho) 
Rating: PG
Summary:  An angel clipped his wings for love. Is it worth it?
Disclaimer: Purely fictional, for entertainment only

A/N: A random drabble. Trying a different writing style.

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I am an angel, no, I was an angel, until....

I clipped my wings, gave up immortality, for him, Satoshi Ohno.


I was still young, so was he.

He was my first charge. I was his little guardian angel.

I watched him from above, his cute chubby face attracted me.

He almost drown in the river, I saved him, but he didn't know who I was.

I sneaked down from heaven, to spend time with him, without telling him who I was.

“I'm Sho.”

“I'm Satoshi.”

We climbed trees, ran in the field, flied kites, caught fishes.

We were happy together.

We promised each other we'll be together forever.


But I got caught, I got punished, couldn't meet with him anymore.

I cried.

Looking at him from above, he waited for me, but I couldn't be with him.

Seeing him so sad and disappointed, I cried again.


He is now a grown man, and so am I.

But he seemed to have forgotten about me.

Lots of girls like him, some boys too.

When he kisses someone, I feel sad, I feel jealous.

I want to be with him, even though I don't know if he still wants me.


I decided to clip my wings, I want to be with him.

Eternal life is eternal torture to me if I can't be with him.


“You know the rule, right?” I was warned by my superior.

“You clip your wings for him. He must remember you without being told within 24 hours.”

“Or you will lose not only your immortality, but your mortal life as well. You'll die, forever.”


Nothing could change my mind.


It's the first pain I ever felt, and it's unbearable.

I feel like my whole body is burning, inside and outside.

It's seems forever. I almost gave up.

But I thought of him, my love for him made me strong.

Finally I got through.

I'm mortal now, the same as him.


But, how can I make him remember me?


“Who are you?” He asked. “You look – familiar.”

Really?! Do you remember me? I guess not – yet.

“I'm new in town. Would you mind showing me around?”

“Sure, I'll be glad to.”


“This is a big tree.” I said. “Have you climbed it before?”

This is the tree which we climbed together. Do you remember?

“Long time ago. I don't like climbing trees anymore.” He replied.

“Why not? It's fun. Let's climb together.” I tried to make him remember, remember me.

“No, I don't want to.”

He doesn't remember me.


We passed by the field where we ran and raced and chased each other.

“Did you play here when you were little?”

I hinted, made him recall what he did, with me.

“I supposed. Many kids did.”

I ran down the field, reliving the happy times we had.

I wish he would run with me, laugh with me.

But he just stood there, looking at me.

He still doesn't remember me.


“Ouch!” I kicked into a rock and fell.

My knee hurt, so bad, and blood coming out from the wound.

That's right, I'm mortal now.

I feel pain, I bleed.

Never thought it could hurt so much.

Am I hurting because of the wound or because he still doesn't remember?

I can't tell.


He took me home and cleaned my wound.

It's nightfall already and I spent the night.

Seeing his sleeping face, I quietly laid a gentle kiss.

12 hours, that's all I have left.

How can I make you remember?


Morning came and he made me breakfast.

“You still like to make pancakes for breakfast” I laughed.

“How do you know that?” He puzzled.

I know everything about you, will you give me the chance to tell you everything about me?


“Let's go fishing.” That's my last hope.

Towards the river we went.

“Who did you go fishing with?” I asked, hoping to jog his memory.

“By myself, mostly”


Did he totally forget about me?

I feel weaker already, both physically and mentally.

If he really forgot about me, then let me die.

There is no point of living with agony, anyway.


Anticipating my short life will end soon, I looked at him one more time.

I slipped? I fell? I don't know.

But into the river I went.

I couldn't breathe, I couldn't swim.

I could only see the image of me saving him from drowning long ago.

That's how it began, let it be how it ends.

I closed my eyes and said goodbye.


Where am I? I opened my eyes and saw light.

I can't be in heaven, I could never go back.

May be in hell? Cos I clipped my wings?

The image before my eyes became clearer, it's him!

“You're awake!” I heard him said, seeing tears in his eyes.


How can that be?

I didn't die? But the rule...

“You came back, you came back for me. Why didn't you tell me?” He said happily.

“I – ”

“Last time you saved me, this time I saved you. We are equal now.”

He saved me! He remembered me!

I can live! I can be with him!


“Don't leave me again!” He said before he kissed me.

“I won't, ever.” I kissed him back.


I have no regret to be a fallen angel.


// The End


( 21 comments — Leave a comment )
May. 27th, 2011 05:14 pm (UTC)
First? xD
So cute ^-^
May. 27th, 2011 08:00 pm (UTC)
Sacrifice one thing for another, but glad that they were together in the end :D
May. 27th, 2011 09:39 pm (UTC)
imagining sho chan as as angel
May. 28th, 2011 08:30 am (UTC)
aaa.... my heart... :) so sweet... :)
May. 28th, 2011 04:00 pm (UTC)
Aww~ so sweet and beautiful~ (*^.^*)
Thanks for sharing~ ♥
May. 29th, 2011 12:39 pm (UTC)

I love this story, this story is very touching my heart!

May. 29th, 2011 01:27 pm (UTC)
so beautiful and touching
thank you so much for sharing
May. 29th, 2011 02:42 pm (UTC)
This was really sweet ;w; thanks for sharing
May. 29th, 2011 02:59 pm (UTC)
kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii thank you so much honey love it ^_^
May. 29th, 2011 05:11 pm (UTC)
cute ><
thank you for writing this xD
May. 29th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)

May. 29th, 2011 08:04 pm (UTC)
May. 29th, 2011 09:14 pm (UTC)
It so cute XDD
Unexpectedly this format is really good, I enjoy it^^
May. 29th, 2011 11:31 pm (UTC)
Aw, that was so sweet! And I liked the format... even though everything is short sentences, it flowed really well and you packed a lot of feelings into something very concise.

Thank you so much!
May. 30th, 2011 01:59 am (UTC)
this was so cute and sweet! i like this kind of story.
thank you for sharing :)
Jun. 5th, 2011 12:41 am (UTC)
cute! And sad for sho, but YAY for happy ending~!
Jun. 8th, 2011 11:36 pm (UTC)
超かわいい!!! (*_*)

Oct. 22nd, 2012 08:49 am (UTC)
oh angel sho \(≧▼≦)/
it's sweet fic <3
May. 5th, 2013 10:04 pm (UTC)
I've always been in-love with angels (or more like, I'm really obsessed with their wings xD~<3). And this is just adorable! I loved the innocence of the two young boys just frolicking and playing about and warming up to each other's companies. I loved the sacrifice that angel Sho did to be with his beloved, despite knowing the risks. I really loved how Ohno eventually remembered him by a similar event that incited their first meeting. Their lives have just come full circle and the future finally looked brigther for the both of them.

Sometimes it really does pay to risk everything for love, ne? Thank you for sharing this lovely Yama fix! ~<3
Jul. 14th, 2015 08:29 pm (UTC)
This kind of long drabble is something I should try sometime too!

Thanks for the lovely story.
I adored angel Sho <3333

Edited at 2015-07-14 11:29 pm (UTC)
Aug. 20th, 2015 03:49 am (UTC)
This is sweet!
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